kizolk
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Post by kizolk on Jan 27, 2024 23:36:19 GMT
The _______ in his hand; But ere it fall, that thundering ball Do both "it" and "that thundering ball" refer to the blank? I still can't interpret those two lines. |
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kizolk
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Post by kizolk on Jan 27, 2024 23:36:47 GMT
who bits it move/slide/walk/march/crawl
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 27, 2024 23:37:03 GMT
Do both "it" and "that thundering ball" refer to the blank? Yes. |
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 27, 2024 23:37:32 GMT
who bits it move/slide/walk/march/crawl Right general track. |
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kizolk
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Post by kizolk on Jan 27, 2024 23:37:52 GMT
with its ice astay
Let's make up words.
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 27, 2024 23:47:16 GMT
The right word isn't an uncommon one.
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 28, 2024 0:13:57 GMT
But ere it fall, that thundering ball Mountain. Ball. BIG ball. |
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kizolk
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Post by kizolk on Jan 28, 2024 0:18:48 GMT
I thought of the sun at one point, but couldn't find a trochee. Even though I feel like I should be able to. But just in case there's some variation in the meter, let's try "sun".
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Post by Etaoin Shrdlu on Jan 28, 2024 0:34:55 GMT
boulder
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Post by Etaoin Shrdlu on Jan 28, 2024 0:35:32 GMT
Though that may not be that common.
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 28, 2024 0:46:40 GMT
Neither the sun nor a boulder, but the latter is less far off.
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 28, 2024 0:48:50 GMT
To be fair, it's not quite literally a ball, but it's often imagined as such. And it could fairly be compared to a BIG certain kind of ball.
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kizolk
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Post by kizolk on Jan 28, 2024 0:49:44 GMT
planet
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 28, 2024 0:50:50 GMT
If it were a planet, I would have said that "sun" was less far off than "boulder", though I guess you could argue the point...
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Post by Pacifica on Jan 28, 2024 0:51:37 GMT
The mountain setting is really important.
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